Very nice, I believe that a cello would add something to the second half (from 2:30 onward). Overall, its good but needs a little bit more "Umph."
Very nice, I believe that a cello would add something to the second half (from 2:30 onward). Overall, its good but needs a little bit more "Umph."
Thanks! :)
This is pretty good but it doesn't sound like a song, more like lots of fragments that I would like to hear more of.
Everything is a song. Thx for the review.
It feels like its missing something, how many octaves does it span (for most of the song)? try adding more movement to the melodies.
Most of the song its spanning 4 octaves, i agree i should add more movement in melodies, but remember that its the first song i've made in FL studio, and also the first song i composed in this genre, which means i didnt had any expirience with any of those 2.
Thanks for feedback tho, i love feedback because it helps people to improve.
It's a very nice song, but it evolves a bit too slowly, try adding more modulations to the melody. and try building up to a more epic ending rather than a slow fade.
Thanks for the feedback. I did end up updated it like you said. I think you might like it more now.
Nice melody, but the chord progressions could be a lot smoother. And you could add a bit more variety, it sounds kind of monotonous in the middle (literally meaning one (mono) tone repeated too many times). Possibly you could add a few more parts like a violin or similar instrument. Overall its a very nice beginning to what could become a great piece.
Aye, thanks for the tips! Part two will be a lot more developed, and I'll keep a lot of what you've said in mind.
Since when does an enigmatic alchemist need to explain themselves? I guess I should explain the nature of the alchemy. And that would be music.
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