EnigmaticAlchemist's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Falling for You]

Very nice, I believe that a cello would add something to the second half (from 2:30 onward). Overall, its good but needs a little bit more "Umph."

toshkabg responds:

Thanks! :)

[Expiriments (completed)]

It feels like its missing something, how many octaves does it span (for most of the song)? try adding more movement to the melodies.

MadMusic responds:

Most of the song its spanning 4 octaves, i agree i should add more movement in melodies, but remember that its the first song i've made in FL studio, and also the first song i composed in this genre, which means i didnt had any expirience with any of those 2.

Thanks for feedback tho, i love feedback because it helps people to improve.

[Bathed in Radiance Part 1]

Nice melody, but the chord progressions could be a lot smoother. And you could add a bit more variety, it sounds kind of monotonous in the middle (literally meaning one (mono) tone repeated too many times). Possibly you could add a few more parts like a violin or similar instrument. Overall its a very nice beginning to what could become a great piece.

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX responds:

Aye, thanks for the tips! Part two will be a lot more developed, and I'll keep a lot of what you've said in mind.